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Close your eyes
And say goonight
I say goodbye
For the very last time

I close the door
Say nothing more
Don't realize it'll be
My last goodbye.

You dream away
All your worries
All your demons
Lay down to rest

I don't pay attention
Don't notice your cry
For help
Take advantage of you
As you dream awayy.

I let you slip from my hands
Turned my back on you
Let you disappear

Now you're gone
I can't help but mourn
The death of my beloved.

You should sleep in your bed
Unconscious only in your head
Not asleep in the clouds
Where we can't be proud

They too
Shoved you away
But at least they would say
"I love you"

The last words to hear.

And just like that
Our young future
Says goodnight

Without saying a single word.
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My heart goes out to those who were lost in the shooting in CT. This poem is dedicated to the poor children who will never be able to grow up, work, or have children of their own.
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Mood: Sadness ~Qwebeck Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful and sad...
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~Miscellaneous123 Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is... It's a shame for this to have happened to those poor children...
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I teared up reading this. Now every time I watch the news I'm gonna think back to these words.
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~Miscellaneous123 Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah; this has me thinking a lot as well... thank you though for the comment.
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~TristenCoy Dec 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Wonderful poem! That was such a horrible thing to happen to those children :( And adults!! :(
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~Miscellaneous123 Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah; it's a tragedy. Every word of that poem comes from my heart and how my mindset goes to those children; from of course, an aspect of the world. We didn't know who they were before they were killed. It's as if we were pushing them away; but now that they're gone, everyone just wants to hold them close.
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~TristenCoy Dec 19, 2012  Student General Artist
I know exactly what you mean..
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!Avenged7xdragon6661 Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh...that was the saddest thing that has happened :( and around the holidays too...it's just not right. I hope that the families will be healed and realize that their children are in a much better place :) And this is a nice poem you wrote too...

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..METAL SANTA? WTF?! :XD::XD::XD:
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~Miscellaneous123 Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you... Yeah, people were saying how christmas was cancelled and everything; and how, instead of them wrapping presents in boxes for their kids; they're gonna have to wrap their kids in boxes... It's so sad..


Yes. That was the best thing I've ever witnessed xD METAL SANTA!!!
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!Avenged7xdragon6661 Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh man that's just downright terrible and so hard to imagine as well :( It's like wrapping up your love greatest dreams and best moments...Hahahahaha yeah! A funnel drinking headbanging hardrocking and party wasted fat-ass man in a red suit...Best fucking Santa of the year!!!! XD
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